ext_24166 ([identity profile] joonscribble.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fairyd123 2009-07-08 04:56 pm (UTC)

Great review! I especially like what you had to say about Ianto and his sister's conversation about the leg-breaking incident. When I heard Ianto's take on it, my concern spiked that the comms would get overflooded with stories about an abusive father. I did like Rhiannon's comment afterwards telling Ianto that he should have held on tighter. It's brief, but I like that she pushes a bit more responsibility onto him, sort of as a gentle tap across the head not to wallow.

The shoe-horning in of Habiba into certain scenes is also ridiculous. When I once did office temp work, I could barely get the code to the bathroom and this was a tiny ad company and not the British government.

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